Age/Gender: 22, Male
Location: somewhere ( i think)
Job: full time student
"Its all fun and games till somebody loses an eye" Sam "Serious" Stone, level 1.
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Flash Reviews: 176
Music Reviews: 0
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176 Reviews | 46 w/ Responses
You spent way too much effort on the intro. A flash movie doesn't need a fancy intro, it just needs a preloader (which can be as simple as a button that you can only press when it's done loading). You should put much more effort into the actual flash.
Author's Response:
True, the intro was over-done, but I only copy/pasted it from a prior Flash I was working on. Yes, I'm that lazy. My bad? Hehe... Seriously though, yes, this movie does need some serious work. Thanks for the critique.
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And the last line is sheer genius.
Congrats (wo?)man, you have a winner here.
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And now for something, completely different...
Great work man. I love the newspaper.
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HOW I SHOOP DA WOOP?
Author's Response:
Of course, by firing your lazer, old bean.
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The animation was superb, smooth and pretty much flawless. The graphics were beautiful, and the lyrics, well, you'll just have to listen for yourselves my friends.
I would like to ask about one thing: You dedicated this to BS's soul, but surely she didn't have one in the first place?
Author's Response:
Bwahaha, I'll have to tell Akira about that.
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Tell me, elastic collisions, with no drag or gravity effects?
I suppose this could represent a gas. But enough of nitpicking.
A simple concept (which is usually, and in this case a good thing) combined with good physics makes for an addictive game, made even more so by the grading recieved at the end.
I thought that maybe the background could be a little more than just plain white? Nothing distracting (well, not too much at first :p), maybe just a gentle pulse of colours?
Otherwise, a great game, especially for teaching hand-eye coordination aswell as spacial awareness and perception.
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OJECTION!
pretty freakin awesome.
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You do realise that you've just created a flash based version of skynet, right?
oh well, never mind.
Author's Response:
Um... not quite sure what you mean but hey thanks for the GREAT review!
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"duuude....freakin' awesome"
if you fix the preloader/start issue, it'll be even more freakn' awesome.
Nice parody.
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"I'm guessing Tom has already seen this..."
I couldn't help noticing that this is waaay over the 5meg limit, so I'm guessing Tom has deemed it appropriate for submission. But still feel that this doesn't belong on NG, as it consists of not much more than an Embedded movie, made from a bunch of clips, set to music.
I understand the message that you are conveying, but i still have my doubts.
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