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[Magnus BG Rough Draft]

Too much on the intro

You spent way too much effort on the intro. A flash movie doesn't need a fancy intro, it just needs a preloader (which can be as simple as a button that you can only press when it's done loading). You should put much more effort into the actual flash.

BMFMagnus responds:

True, the intro was over-done, but I only copy/pasted it from a prior Flash I was working on. Yes, I'm that lazy. My bad? Hehe... Seriously though, yes, this movie does need some serious work. Thanks for the critique.

[Miss Dynamite XXII iraq]

It shames me to say this but:

HOW I SHOOP DA WOOP?

Sirkowski responds:

Of course, by firing your lazer, old bean.

[Akira the Don - Hypocrite]

Pretty darn sweet.

The animation was superb, smooth and pretty much flawless. The graphics were beautiful, and the lyrics, well, you'll just have to listen for yourselves my friends.
I would like to ask about one thing: You dedicated this to BS's soul, but surely she didn't have one in the first place?

Wonchop responds:

Bwahaha, I'll have to tell Akira about that.

[DOS-MAN]

Heh heh heh.

You do realise that you've just created a flash based version of skynet, right?
oh well, never mind.

jackbliss responds:

Um... not quite sure what you mean but hey thanks for the GREAT review!

[Subconscious Postcards]

Sir, I salute your genius.

That quote was put to excellent use. An perfect parody of the original intent of the speech. Good form, sir!

SCSP responds:

i spent 2 years of research on this, so yea.

[Do not vote for Tom Fulp!]

dude....

you pointed out Tom's best qualities....and who needs old women anyway?

JMartin97 responds:

lol..I wish people would actually review the flash...instead of these weird comments that make no sense...maybe it's just that time of night.

[Intro to the Stock Market]

right on...

excellent break down of the market there. very acurate.
i wonder if there really is a company with initials C.R.A.P...that produce Products Of Outstanding Potential.

Malkavbug responds:

Hmmmm maybe. Sadly no company has taken CRAP for a ticker symbol yet.

if I ever bring a company public I will be sure to trade it under the CRAP symbol. That way I can say I am a CRAP Executive (hidden unmentioned humor from the flash :P).

As a CRAP executive I will strive to produce the best POOP I can!

[CC - Where'd It Go?]

heh heh, sweet.

Good joke...I kinda saw it coming, but wasn't too sure, so i still laughed quite a bit.

However, if you can speed up the voices, that would be pretty good, and reduce some of the pauses.
other than that, good job.

TheCatsPajamas responds:

I like the sharp pauses for some reason. I wanted it to add to the "akward" effect.

[Spaced Out! (Pilot)]

Fucking A dude.

Totally sweet, and i mean sweet.

(but ejay?!?! How could you pull such musicy goodness out of ejay? 'tis nay possible)

grim-studios responds:

LOL. Obviously, it IS possible. Just takes a lot of time with that program. :)