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[Old: The Project Ep.1]

Nice work.

I follow the school of thought that a movie is good if it is good, not because it is sticks or madness clone, or matrix or dbz rip-offs/tributes. This movie is good. I can see that you put a lot of work into it. The detail on the weapons was enough. Not too much to take in, but not simple block-drawings.
However, as with almost all good and great movies, there are a few things that could be improved. For example, you have sfx for firing the gun, but none for loading/cocking. Also, the angle of the backs is fine for standing or walking leisurely, but the faster people walk/run/charge, the shallower the back. Another point on the movement of the characters is although the forward motion of the legs is fine; the legs also need to move backwards. If you are not sure what I mean, try watching a friend walk/run. Even better would be to video the friend with a digital camera/camcorder, and study it using frame-by-frame.
Despite the inevitable points that need improving, this is a good movie, although I personally prefer the “prequel” to this one.

ZT responds:

All very good points. Of course I made this movie quite a long time ago.. I think I got walking figured out now, thats certainly great advice, though.

I prefer the prequel too. =D
Thanks for the review.
-ZT

[2004 | Timefight]

Dude. ¦-|

Man, that was fun. like xiao xiao, but better. It was fun trying to guess when the guy would go next, from where the others appear. Nice twist on the old hat with that time-travelling, and i'm glad you did it properly. I also like the bit where the dude says " Stereotypical Stick boss". Nice touch.

Dwarfer-Stu responds:

ooooh better than xiao xiao? I dunnooo... but I'm really glad you liked it :D

[What if Hitler Lived?]

DUDE!

khoa1, how can you say that? That sub looks tasty! I want that sub! give me that sub now! I want my sub! Erm, ok, i'm done now.

Pinnicle responds:

just go to subway and ask for the uber sub. Its not bad, I keep picking off the sushi though.

[Commercial]

Nice idea

When i was under the influence of alcohol(i.e. i was legless), i was high on weed as well, and i just sat there, going, hey, kool, i can't walk,but i definately did not get wings fromthe weed. One question: which Starburst ad was it based on? the R rated one?

Jordanog responds:

yes, the R rated one...I figured everyone had seen it. The one with the guy with the big fro and the two people behind him. and they keep randomly leaning back for no reason. I think i pretty much got it. except in the real commercial the car just flew up in the air and landed somewhere. it didn't land on a guy.

[FFVI:The Day After Part11]

Great work.

Its keeping in line with the rest of your work. All in all a great use of classic sprites.

Vinstigator responds:

Thanks!

[Permission Slip]

good start.

i know it needs work, i'm sure you do, and i know what its like when ppl say your work is pointless, or shit or it should be blammed. i think you should take this back, and do some work on it.and i dont think that those stupid americans who think dubya is great are ready for stuff like this, so i suggest you do something else in the mean time. but it is a good idea, and it has alotof potential.

TheOtherTruth responds:

Thank you for your review.

...and you are right! I would have liked to put a little more time into this one, but I wanted to get it out while the speech was still in everybody's mind.

In a week, this movie will be much less relevant.

[Germaine Exposes Herself]

fuck this pathetic piss-take

you have only disgraced ur self for making such a shit piss-take, and you even managed to make that shitty song and the tricky the clown joke look better than you. Don't rip a good series

Chen-Baiwan responds:

Such harsh language...you should wash out your mouth with soap, dear. Anyways...I didn't rip a good series...I ripped a bad one.
You've managed to disgrace yourself more in one review than I have in a movie...although that's not saying much since I brought little if any dishonor or disgrace from my movie.

[Jerricco: Episode I]

Absolutely Brilliant.

This deserves to be in the top 50, if not the top 25.
I do partially agree with ClayFight. Some of the graphics do need a bit of work, and personally, I thought that the Helicopter didn't look quite so realistic, but overall it was a brilliant movie, the sounds were done properly, the music fitted the theme, and you had some realistic animation.

One thing I would add to it is when Jerrico is escaping down the corridoor, he should 1) have to fire more bullets to hit the dudes shooting at him; and 2)He should get hit at least once.
Other than that, its great. Cant wait for Ep2.

jerricco-team responds:

Wow, that's cool that you think it should be in the top 50. I try to get between cartoony and realistic. I spent alot of time find just the right sounds and making the music. Thanks for the input and thanks ALOT for the review.

[My world madness (ep1)]

Nice.

I found no problem with the sound, unless yuo mean the lack of gunshots, but other than that, its good. keep it up, and don't listen to cocksucking balmpoint hunters. even tho i'm one of them. apart from the cocksucking bit.

Freetospeak responds:

:D. Yeah... can u hear the lag or is it just meh fucking comp?

[Stick Figure Penalty: C2]

SWEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!!

This is so great. The reason i only gave an overall 9, is because the dude didn't get out or get his own back. btw, i found 2 of the hidden deaths, tho 1 of them isn't realya death( and is very sick), and the other, i don't get the whole 7 days thing. could sumone tell me where the third death is?

Ringfinger responds:

Go to the video store, and rent a movie called "The Ring" then you'll get it.