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[Old: The Project Ep.1]

Nice work.

I follow the school of thought that a movie is good if it is good, not because it is sticks or madness clone, or matrix or dbz rip-offs/tributes. This movie is good. I can see that you put a lot of work into it. The detail on the weapons was enough. Not too much to take in, but not simple block-drawings.
However, as with almost all good and great movies, there are a few things that could be improved. For example, you have sfx for firing the gun, but none for loading/cocking. Also, the angle of the backs is fine for standing or walking leisurely, but the faster people walk/run/charge, the shallower the back. Another point on the movement of the characters is although the forward motion of the legs is fine; the legs also need to move backwards. If you are not sure what I mean, try watching a friend walk/run. Even better would be to video the friend with a digital camera/camcorder, and study it using frame-by-frame.
Despite the inevitable points that need improving, this is a good movie, although I personally prefer the “prequel” to this one.

ZT responds:

All very good points. Of course I made this movie quite a long time ago.. I think I got walking figured out now, thats certainly great advice, though.

I prefer the prequel too. =D
Thanks for the review.
-ZT

[2004 | Timefight]

Dude. ¦-|

Man, that was fun. like xiao xiao, but better. It was fun trying to guess when the guy would go next, from where the others appear. Nice twist on the old hat with that time-travelling, and i'm glad you did it properly. I also like the bit where the dude says " Stereotypical Stick boss". Nice touch.

Dwarfer-Stu responds:

ooooh better than xiao xiao? I dunnooo... but I'm really glad you liked it :D

[lookie lookie, fire!]

DUDE! You a Pyromaniac?

Join the club dude! Man that is the best. One of the funniest things i haveseen since the exam period began for us over in the good old U.K.

[FIght.]

Hmmm. Good for first try.

This looks awfully familliar, but not enough for me to even consider bringing the whistle, so i'll accept that its yours. Keep up the fight! (And the good animation, but that goes without saying.)

[What if Hitler Lived?]

DUDE!

khoa1, how can you say that? That sub looks tasty! I want that sub! give me that sub now! I want my sub! Erm, ok, i'm done now.

Pinnicle responds:

just go to subway and ask for the uber sub. Its not bad, I keep picking off the sushi though.

[Sonic Stereo]

DUUUUUU-HUUU-HUUUUUDE!

Sweet dude, i love that flash. I could see that happening when it came onto sonic, but, anyway, its completely different from anything else i've seen, and its nice to see sumat other than stick fights (cept battle field and xiao xiao) and clock movies.

[Mars Conspiracy (Chptr07)]

nice.

as with all 8 of them so far, it is great.
you get your inspiration from 40k, and GTAVC, don't you.

That was a rhino i spotted earlier, and those were assault marine jump-packs with two mounted miniguns from gtavc, right?

[skateboard massacre]

Sweet dude.

I like the idea, a kind of skate punk/bail mixed with battlefield. fresh idea man, Nice work. Fifen.

[Commercial]

Nice idea

When i was under the influence of alcohol(i.e. i was legless), i was high on weed as well, and i just sat there, going, hey, kool, i can't walk,but i definately did not get wings fromthe weed. One question: which Starburst ad was it based on? the R rated one?

Jordanog responds:

yes, the R rated one...I figured everyone had seen it. The one with the guy with the big fro and the two people behind him. and they keep randomly leaning back for no reason. I think i pretty much got it. except in the real commercial the car just flew up in the air and landed somewhere. it didn't land on a guy.